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Edits to Lead

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@Rosiestep and Ipigott: As a quick heads-up, I think the lead section will need some substantial edits before the article's GA nomination. The lead should be briefly summarizing the rest of the article (preferably max. 3-4 paragraphs), but right now I'm seeing a ton of details here (some unnecessary) that aren't mentioned anywhere else in the article. I mulled over possible fixes/content incorporation, but I think it will have to wait until we've finished copy edits to the main sections. Alanna the Brave (talk) 18:00, 19 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Alanna the Brave and Ipigott:, agree. --Rosiestep (talk) 19:36, 19 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]