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Good articlePhilip Primrose has been listed as one of the History good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
June 2, 2011Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on June 5, 2011.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that police officer and future Lieutenant Governor of Alberta Philip Primrose was a distant cousin to the Earls of Rosebery?

WikiProject class rating

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This article was automatically assessed because at least one article was rated and this bot brought all the other ratings up to at least that level. BetacommandBot 02:01, 28 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Philip Primrose/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Nikkimaria (talk) 03:34, 1 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

On hold pending copy-editing. Nikkimaria (talk) 04:21, 1 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. Will get to this later today sometime. Connormah (talk) 22:22, 1 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Writing and formatting

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  • Some unneeded repetition - in the lead we see "Upon his" x 2, repeat of retirement in 1915, "took up" x 2, etc
  • Some copy-editing is needed here - for example, what is the "United Kingsdon"?
  • The first para of Early life uses "He" repeatedly, and it's not entirely clear where his father stops and Philip begins
  • Macleod or Macloed?
  • Ellipses should not be set with square brackets
  • Need more hyphens - for example, "three-round salute"

Accuracy and verifiability

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  • Order Bibliography alphabetically?
  • Ref 8: legislative assembly is the publisher, not the author
  • Ref 12: Alberta Online Encyclopedia could be considered either a work or a publisher, but is definitely not an author
  • Why include publisher location for one bibliography entry and not the other two

Broad

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Some minor repetition of information

Neutrality

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No issues noted

Stability

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No issues noted

Images

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  • Source link for 1914 NWMP image is dead