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Hi Akhan22 this is looking nearly perfect! I only see a few things to point out:

  • Generally, we don't include links to other websites in the body of a Wikipedia article. These links are instead placed at the bottom of the article in an "external links" section. I see a couple of external links that need to be removed or relocated (B-L violation in grand unified theories, women in physics)
  • Your citation formatting is nearly perfect, but in the Honors and awards section I see one instance where there's a space between the punctuation and the reference.
  • I fixed the redlinks in your infobox by just making them link to the respective societies
  • Her spouse is listed in the infobox but not the article. If it's not present and cited in the article, then it has to have a citation accompanying it in the infobox. It can be kind of tricky to add citations to infoboxes using the visual editor. Let me know if you need help, and I can add it using the source editor.
  • The last sentence of "Honours and awards" doesn't really seem like an award, more like part of her career

This is looking really great! Nicely done :) Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:00, 5 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Elysia (Wiki Ed), thank you for your insightful comments and feedback :). I will implement your suggestions. 
  • I found a nice citation to add/mention her spouse in the article. 
  • You are right about the last sentence in the awards section, I will shift it to career section. Akhan22 (talk) 21:59, 5 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]