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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 10:17, 9 February 2013 (UTC)

Travis Head

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Created/expanded by IgnorantArmies (talk). Nominated by LlamaAl (talk) at 16:14, 28 January 2013 (UTC)

  • (Article's creator) thanks for the nomination, but your blurb is pretty boring, to be honest. I'd suggest something along the lines of "... that cricketer Travis Head was hit by a car shortly after completing a four-day match for South Australia? IgnorantArmies 14:58, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
  • Just barely squeaks by the 1500 character mark. I mean, with 1518 characters of prose, I gave thought to failing it as too short despite its technically surpassing 1500. I do suggest breaking it up into more than one paragraph for readibility. Anywho, I prefer the ALT1 hook, which is reliably sourced. The article as a whole is well sourced. This wasn't a self-nom, so QPQ is not required. – Muboshgu (talk) 23:42, 8 February 2013 (UTC)