Wikipedia:Peer review/Bubbles the Clown/archive1
I've referenced everything in the article and think that there are not quite enough reliable sources for getting this to GA status. Feedback would good.--h i s s p a c e r e s e a r c h 15:23, 9 May 2007 (UTC)
- And I'd rather this article was not viewed as a content fork.-h i s s p a c e r e s e a r c h 15:32, 9 May 2007 (UTC)
*The image is almost too small to be useful. Is that fixable?
*The lead says "any other living person", which implies Bubbles is alive.
*The lead section should be an overview, so there's no reason for an "overview" section.*The quote is referenced, which is important, but the text should say who says it.
- The last sentence is cute, but probably inappropriate. One reason is that the article does not discuss the actual clown doll itself, but only the photograph of the doll. If the doll itself is to be discussed (who owned it, what happened to it), then it should probably be in its own section.
– Quadell (talk) (random) 00:15, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
I'll see if I can create a higher resolution picture. I'll also do some research into his fate, and create a section on that. Thanks for comments.
Riatsila 10:17, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
- How would you go about researching his fate? Emailing the BBC?-h i s s p a c e r e s e a r c h 12:17, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
Probably. I am emailing them anyway about the upcoming dates that test card J is due to be shown.
Riatsila 15:31, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
- Well, tell me when Test Card J is due to be shown (it is only shown once a year in early January now it seems) and please tell me what happened to Bubbles.-h i s s p a c e r e s e a r c h 18:55, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
- Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 23:29, 10 May 2007 (UTC)
I've sent the email, but due to the large amount of emails they recieve it will be some time until I get a reply.