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O Level Literature Commentary Sample - Compressed
O Level Literature Commentary Sample - Compressed
S. SITHOLE
Dingani Publishers
Between 10th & 11th Avenue
Robert Mugabe, Bulawayo
PAPER 2
Section A: The valley of Tantalika
Black boy
Section B: Othello
Lord of the flies
Western African
Summary
The story is about Jimi a company executive who is in illicit dealing with one
Mavhiri. Mavhiri is expected to ferry out illegal parcels. However at this time
Mavhiri is hesitant as he has heard talk that there are complaints of corrupt
leadership in the company. Jimi forces Mavhiri to accept the merchandize so they
can both make some money. Mavhiri attempts to argue with him but he fails to
arrive Jimi to let go of the deal. In the end Mavhiri reveals his true identity that he
is an undercover detective and places Jimi under arrest.
Themes
Corruption, betrayal, greed, exploitation, abuse of authority, deception, smuggling
of precious minerals, bribery, vice vs virtue.
Jimi
Wealthy – his black Mercedes is a symbol of wealth and high status, typical
of black leadership in post-colonial era.
Forceful – he tries by all means to force Mavhiri to deliver the package the
reader is led to assume that the groundnut is a diamond.
Corrupt – Jimi orchestrates diamond smuggling using Mavhiri as a courier.
He boast of illegally benefiting from the country’s wealth.
Greedy – he believes it is his right to eat Zimbabwe
Manipulative – he forces Mavhiri to continue smuggling because he did
him a big favor by him a job in the company.
Disillusioned – his illusion that Mavhiri was his underdog is shattered
when he discovers that he is a detective.
Mavhiri
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Visual imagery – chains maker with a big pot belly, broad shoulders, and
small effective to show a life of excels
Symbolism – ‘gleaming black Mercedes’, it represents wealth and power.
The car shows Jimi’s influence.
Dialogue – it is used to expose inter personal conflict between Jimi and
Mavhiri
Proverb – ‘make hay while the sun is still shining’- Jimi’s emotional
blackmail to persuade Mavhiri to continue participating in diamond
smuggling.
Metaphor – ‘groundnut’ -sly name for the diamond to be smuggled
Simile – ‘it is like a king journey up a mountain’ Jimis response to the risk
of being caught he considers it part of the scheme of smuggling
Analogy – the use of browsing even, diverting from the furious and the
farmer who complains of undisciplined cattle that need to be unspanned
and represent the moral debate between good and evil.
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PRACTICE QUESTIONS
The village priest
1. Discuss the challenges faced by guerillas and their collaborators during thr
struggle for liberation (25)
2. What feelings are evoked as you read the story (25)
3. Give an account of the attack on Nyamandu’s shop (25)
Bruised on Both sides
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Togara composes himself and announces that he and his people are ready for Rudo
to come and join the family as his wife. He feels she is mature enough to take on
the role of mother and wife in a month’s time. Atete Rutendo asks if Rudo is old
enough at seventeen. She asks if Togara can give Rudo two, three of four more
years, for her education. Togara refuses stating that he has psychological, social
and physical needs. He insists he has a loving and financially stable home waiting
for her. Atete Rutendo states that she will inform Rudo’s father. As he leaves Atete
states that if there was time, she would have prepared the children’s peanut butter.
As Togara exits he states that it should be ready in his next visit. Atete Rutendo
continues to pick up peanuts from the floor and hears a car pulling up. Rudo enter
with Leo. They receive a warm welcome Atete appreciates the benefits of having
a car. Rudo officially introduces her boyfriend to Atete Rutendo. He is shy, third
child in a family of six.
Atete Rutendo is informed that his totem is Soko, Moyondizvo. She is also told
that he is from Wedza and that his mother is at home and his father is working at
Bulawayo. Atete Rutendo keeps forgetting his name. Rudo says she can call him
Lei James, or Lee or Leo or James or Jimmy or L or Jay or LJ. She is very excited
about her aunt meeting her boyfriend. Lei tells Atete Rutendo the story behind his
name. She is also informed that Leo James is a lawyer. Atete Rutendo is concerned
about whether his salary measures up to a teacher’s salary. Leo James states that
he wishes to marry Rudo in three or 4 years to come, he states that he is travelling
abroad in a month for a six-month course and he wishes to give Rudo a ring as a
promise to marry. Atete Rutendo doesn’t understand the concept of an engagement
and states that in their time they exchanged articles of clothing. Rudo insists Atete
Rutendo handles the engagement arrangements as Leo James leaves in a month.
Leo James would be coming in a weak for a reply he had to leave promptly due to
a business meeting later that afternoon.
Atete Rutendo exclaims that he works on Saturday’s evenings unlike teachers who
worked till Friday afternoon. She tells them that she will go to Rudo’s father in
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Rudo is denied a request to accompany Leo to Harare. Atete Rutendo breaks the
news that she is in a dilemma. She informs Rudo that Togara wants her to join his
family as his wife in a month. Rudo bursts out crying that she doesn’t love Togara
and that she loves Leo. Atete sympathizes with Rudo and states that both of them
are the same however Rudo has to follow her sister’s instructions. Rudo continues
to cry and begs Atete Rutendo to do something
CHARACTER PRESENTATION
Rudo
Idealistic – she believes in true love she says to Atete Rutendo’ you may
call it puppy love but I am seeing true love. She also believes that she
has seen true love.
Rebellious –despite her dream she chooses to defy Tambudzai’s dying
wish (flippantly) defy that I am aware of what said of course
Disillusioned-she discovers that it is Togara and not her father who has
been taking care of her clothing and education.
Ambitious- she wishes to continue with her education to study for a
degree and get married to the love of her life Leo James
Child bride- she is promised for engagement to Togara at a tender age as
a fulfilment to her sisters dying wish.
Amicable- she has an easy relationship with Atete Rutendo.she is also on
good terms with Leo James and builds a good rapport between the two by
her easy dialogue
Atete Rutendo
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Narrator
Black Boy is narrated by the author, Richard Wright, and tells the story of his life
from early childhood to about age twenty-nine.
Point Of View
As the text is written as a stylized memoir, the narrator always speaks in the first
person. Although he occasionally speculates as to what another character thinks or
feels, those speculations are always conditioned by the fact that the narrator is a
real historical figure with limited knowledge.
Setting (Place)
Primarily Jackson, Mississippi; West Helena and Elaine, Arkansas; Memphis,
Tennessee; and Chicago, Illinois, with detours to rural areas in the Deep South and
to New York City
Protagonist - Richard Wright, the author and narrator
Major Conflict
Richard demonstrates inborn individualism and intelligence, traits that can only
cause problems for a black man in the Jim Crow South; he struggles with blacks
and whites alike for acceptance and humane treatment; he struggles with his own
stubborn nature.
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Falling Action
Richard comes to understand the psychic pain of growing up black in America and
realizes his duty to record his experiences and his environment through writing; he
enters the Communist Party and W.P.A. programs, coming into contact with
serious writers and outlets for writing about his ideals; he is ousted from the Party
but comes to a new vision of himself as an artist
Themes - The insidious effects of racism; the individual versus society; the
redemptive power of art
Motifs - Hunger; reading; violence
Symbols - Ella’s infirmity; the Memphis optical shop
Foreshadowing
Perhaps the sharpest foreshadowing in the novel is the activity of Comrade Young
in the Communist Party. The fact that a madman participates in the workings of
the Party without being detected suggests that the Party is fallible. Another
example is Richard’s relationship with his family, a relationship that foreshadows
how his personality will conflict with white authority.
Characters
Author, narrator, and protagonist of Black Boy. Richard is an unpredictable bundle
of contradictions: he is timid yet assured, tough yet compassionate, enormously
intelligent yet ultimately modest. Passive-aggressive as a young boy, Richard
either says very little or becomes melodramatic and says too much. Growing up in
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Summary
Othello is the story of a noble military general who has enjoyed many successes
on the battlefield, but because of mistakes of judgment and his outsider status in
his society, sabotages his most intimate relationship and himself. The play begins
on the grand scale of a military romance unfolding on the Mediterranean Sea.
However, the action of the drama shrinks to the claustrophobic ending in the
cramped bedroom where Othello kills himself after smothering his innocent wife.
The play moves from vast exteriors that provide a backdrop for Othello’s heroism
to interior spaces that offer—both literally and figuratively—no room to breathe.
The play’s constricting trajectory suggests that negative emotions like jealousy put
an emotional chokehold on a person, strangling their ability to think clearly and
thus preventing them from acting reasonably. It also contrasts the arenas in which
Othello is confident and powerful, such as the exterior world of battle, with the
domestic spaces in which he is less secure, and able to be easily manipulated.
The incident that sets the protagonist and antagonist on a collision course occurs
before the play begins, when Othello chooses Cassio as lieutenant. In being passed
over for promotion, Iago feels cast aside and left to fill the role of “ancient” (i.e.,
ensign), a military position that ranks at the very bottom of all commissioned
officers. Though angry with Othello’s choice, Iago feels equally upset that the
coveted job went to Cassio, who Iago considers less qualified than he is. He also
later reveals that he believes Cassio might have slept with his wife (in addition to
suspecting Othello slept with her): “For I fear Cassio with my night-cap too.” Iago
feels doubly degraded: a promotion he believes was rightfully his went to another
man, and both men responsible for the slight – Othello and Cassio – may be
sleeping with his wife. At this point, the audience’s sympathies are aligned with
Iago, as we haven’t yet seen Othello, and Iago does have just cause for his
grievances.
The tension of the play rises once the audience meets Othello and realizes how
disastrous Iago’s plan will be. Othello and Desdemona’s declarations of love for
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CHAPTER SUMMARY
Act I
Before Othello begins, Roderigo has been pursuing Desdemona, a Venetian
noblewoman. One night, he hears from his soldier friend, Iago, that Desdemona
has secretly married his General, the Moorish Othello. Iago bears a grudge against
Othello for overlooking Iago for a lieutenant position. Instead, Othello chose
Michael Cassio, leaving Iago only at the low rank of ensign. Iago urges Roderigo
to continue his pursuit of Desdemona. He knows Senator Brabantio, Desdemona's
father, will dislike having Othello as a son-in-law. So late at night, Iago and
Roderigo wake Brabantio and tell him the news of Desdemona. Brabantio angrily
summons the militia to arrest Othello. At that moment, officers arrive to summon
Brabantio to an urgent meeting of the Senate. The Senate is concerned about the
imminent threat of a Turkish invasion fleet on Cyprus. Full of fury, Brabantio goes
to the council.
Othello Royal Shakespeare Company, 1999. A black Othello wears an
embroidered jacket and a brown gown with broad black and thin white stripes. He
stand with his right arm across his body, gesturing rejection; his expression is
disdainful. Royal Shakespeare Company, 1999
Brabantio interrupts the council, claiming vengeance against Othello. Othello is
already there because he has just been put in command of the forces to repel the
Turks. Othello explains how his stories of military prowess have helped him earn
Desdemona's love (good storytelling is the most important trait in a companion,
after all). Afterwards, Desdemona is called to reinforce the tale and defend her
marriage. Following Desdemona's defence, her father disowns her, and she
chooses to go with Othello on his campaign. She plans to travel in the care of
Lieutenant Cassio and with Emilia, Iago's wife.
Act II
In Cyprus, Montano, the governor of Cyprus, and his soldiers greet Cassio, Iago,
Desdemona, and Emilia as they disembark. Othello soon arrives with news that
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After reading Lord of the Flies, a critic remarked: “Human beings are naturally
evil”. By closely referring to the text, show that this statement is true.
Compare and contrast Ralph and Jack’s leadership qualities. Who in your view is
a better leader?
What lessons do you learn from reading the novel Lord of the Flies?
Give an account of Simon’s secret visits into the jungle up to the time he dies.
Explore the symbolism in Lord of the Flies.
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